Below is a sample of how I would like to word our invitations. Is it okay to start the invitation with the date, and end the invitation with the time? I wasn't sure if it was wrong to separate the date and time of the event in my wording. Any other suggestions that you would like to make to this wording is greatly appreciated! Thank you!
On December thirteenth two thousand seven
two will become one in the Great Smoky Mountains.
Together with their parents,
<BRIDE NAME>
and <GROOM NAME>
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together.
The ceremony will take place
at four fifteen in the afternoon
<LOCATION>
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Sep 11, 2007, 6:25 PM
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Re: [alecktra] Wording the date & time of event
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Dear Alecktra,
If your wedding is informal, you can take liberties with the wording. The date and time aren't usually separated, but this is fine. It is personalized, not confusing, and sweet.
Wording the date & time of event
